Chapter 43

Hello Everyone! So far, everyone seems to like the new update better, which I’m super excited about! I’ve noticed a lot of people have said that Gwen isn’t as obnoxious/ is more mature now. As a writer, it can be very difficult to know how things/characters are going to come across to readers. I have the character in my head and know all their reasons/backstory and it can be difficult to know how much to put in the story without dragging things down, while having the story make sense.One of my favorite things about writing on this platform is that I get direct feedback from readers, as their reading. I’m still learning how to write and create relatable characters.I’m hoping Gwen doesn’t come off as obnoxious/immature/stuck-up anymore. Or, at the very least, if she still does, that her actions are understandable.I am SO thankful for everyone’s patience and time! Thank you for sticking with the story and all your feedback. It really helps me become a better writer :)